Alright
This song has a bit of potential, you seem to be one of those artists that know what they're doing and can make a great song but can't enhance it much yet. Your stuff is very catchy, but very generic. Try using the Fast Distortion, Filter, and Parametric EQ effects as well as Delay 2, those are what really make people's leads and melodies sound great. If you have AIM, IM me, I want to remix this :P
-TheComet (check my stuff!)