The sounds and melody kinda seem to clash. The mix and sample of the piano is icky if you ask me. Piano needs to be crisp and clear if you want it to hold a melody. Kick is decent though sounds kinda like VeH2, might not hurt to give it some mids if you want it to be a trance song. Sounds more like house right now. Percussion loops are nothing to wow over pattern wise.
I'm not sure if there is a melody in there yet but nothing stands out enough to tell me "this is it". It still needs more and I realize it is a WiP but don't get too excited. Keep at it though, take your time and let things flow. The ideas will come and soon you'll have a complete song on your hands.
Not sure if this is what you were looking for when you said "feedback".
Lexx21
Wow good stuff there... can't wait until you finish it up.